by Jupinderjit Singh
They came on me - a rugged part of earth-
and cleaned,
removed the weeds and pebbles,
few stones and thorns and
levelled the potholes.
The quickly smoothened me was their diversion path
till the repaved the original and left
and weeds and thorns grew again.
I, a rugged part of earth.
(Jupinderjit Singh)
3 comments:
You are a great writer. But am unable to understand..weather you written these lines in a poem or a symbolic news feature or may be any thing haapened with you. may be you adapted an NEWS item into poem...What is this..?
usually we consider only lines that rhyme as poetry. But this concept has changed long ago. still, ur suggestion seems good..let me see if I can rhyme it somehow
so so true.
beautiful thought,
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