by Jupinderjit Singh
Through the dangerous ravine,
And the crocodile filled river
And past the snakes in the valley
She comes
Ducking from the prying eyes
And the unknown dangers of the dark
To climb past the chilly mountain
And meet her beloved
Braving all the perils,
Conquering her fear,
And Unfazed all the way
But she trembles!!!!!
She trembles!?!?
just at my touch!!!!!
(by jupinder)
Through the dangerous ravine,
And the crocodile filled river
And past the snakes in the valley
She comes
Ducking from the prying eyes
And the unknown dangers of the dark
To climb past the chilly mountain
And meet her beloved
Braving all the perils,
Conquering her fear,
And Unfazed all the way
But she trembles!!!!!
She trembles!?!?
just at my touch!!!!!
(by jupinder)
1 comment:
i love this poem. but please do away with the marks of punctuation. they limit and circumscribe the free movement of words.
the thought is marvellous and you have presented it crisply. would want to read more poems from your keyboard.
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